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Genius!
ReplyDelete"You're my revision."
Although discarded, Napkin Man is just as amazing as Shabam, even more so because he is a draft and seems to be making his way despite it... That's kick ass!!! He is who he was always meant to be and I hope he embraces it because others will follow suit!
Poor Napkin man!! i love "napkin absorbing water" - way to go David. well written and brilliantly illustrated!
ReplyDeleteBEST CRUMPLES YET! I love the fact that Napkin Man is the draft and Shabam is his revision! As a writer myself, I know how the first draft is often the best, and I look forward to Napkin Man proving that fact in future issues. Also "napkin absorbing water" had me laughing out loud. Great work. Keep 'em coming!
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful! I love the concept - draft meets revision. Brilliant how the revision is all shiny on the outside, but clearly inferior in terms of substance, as if some part of the beauty of the original idea has been lost. Napkin Man is having a tough go of it, but I have a feeling the spark of genius he represents will soon be manifesting... Also, how you managed to seamlessly transition from "pulchritudinous" to a girl being a screamer I'm not sure, but it all works. Bravo, David! Can't wait for Issue #5!
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff, David. Revisiting these characters adds such depth. Looking forward to the next one! :-)tamera
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I love it. I can't seem to shake this one thought, however. Shabam reminds of someone...hmmm...but it just can't be him. No, the guy I'm thinking of is far too busy meditating on the BP oil spill, writing a song (instrumental) about the plight of the Alaskan Harp Seal, and tweeting about the fact that love is all we need. Nope, it simply can't be him.
ReplyDeleteSchulman is taking napkins where they have never gone before! Later, ketchup face!
ReplyDeleteSo much in there. Awesome.
ReplyDeleteI know I'm a month late on this, but Wow! This is so rich on so many levels. I see you and feel you, Tiger! Let the adventures of Napkin Man continue...
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